Monday, January 11, 2010

The Commons // finished


anyway, now we were centuries
sort of had faces / we encircled
- dreamless, muted decibels -
- our treaties / the visible -
we scratched our faces off
our references, lines of credit
- a kind of glow remains -
- a kind of dignified singing -
- blank -
meanwhile, in the drugstore
- blank -
we are your border
- bright -
- inaudible -

8 comments:

Nat Raha said...

bravo. to say the very least.

david_grundy said...

i've really enjoyed the way the commons has unfurled on the blog and i think it's fair to say that it's a major project and an important piece of work. thanks!

alan hay said...

It's been an inspiring thing Sean. Gonna have to make a reading copy. Ain't forgot yr CD btw. Just...uh...slow in the cold, y'know. Soon come.

alan hay said...

It's been an inspiring thing Sean. Gonna have to make a reading copy. Ain't forgot yr CD btw. Just...uh...slow in the cold, y'know. Soon come.

jeff hilson said...

hooray & boo

Simon Howard said...

I'll miss The Commons. It's been wonderful to follow the text here - "inspiring" is right.

Hope there will be a 'hard' copy soon, on that paper stuff. Cheers.

Sean Bonney said...

Thanks everyone for the nice comments.
The whole thing will be a book later in the year, I hope.

postpran said...

echo echo!!! Wish it would never end!!!! Need new doses!!!